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2012-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Thank you for your cooperation. OK! Your means we should pay the cost to SBTS. But we have to attach the details to invoice of development in order to evidence for not withholding tax. We have to know correct information in order for us to know more about it . Please give me a detail about the invoice of JIG. The back data or e-mail of trace will be the detail if we can ensure about JIG. Thank you for your help.

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Hello Bella! Here are my corrections dear. Please check it out and be mindful with the corrections. So, just seat back and relax for now if you are not busy. But I think you have to send this e-mail below to your colleague already. See you later my dear! -Teacher Chloe Dear [Name]. [Name], >>CorrectThank you for your cooperation. >>CorrectOK! >>Correct >>Okay!Your means we should pay the cost to SBTS. >>Did you mean to say that we have to pay the cost for SBTS?But we have to attach the details to invoice of development in order to evidence for not withholding tax. >> We have to attach the details to invoice for development as an evidence for not withholding tax.We have to know correct information in order for us to know more about it . >>We have to know the correct information for us to know more about it. Please give me a detail about the invoice of JIG. >>Correct >>Please give me details about the invoice of JIG.The back data or e-mail of trace will be the detail if we can ensure about JIG. >>The back up data and the e-mail trace are the details that we have about JIG.Thank you for your help. >>Correct  

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