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2012-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I have some questions about the invoice of licence revenues January 2012. I received the invoice of licence revenues from Mrs. [Name]. The invoice number is 92609231. As I understood, we have a small overpaied / overcharged amount end of 2011 of arround 15,000.00EUR. So, the overcharged amount will be Jan.2012 and we can pay licenses again from february 2012. Please refer to the below e-mail and please give me an answer. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you for your help.

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Hello Bella! Here are my corrections dear.  Just check it out! Anyway, have a wonderful night! Talk to you again tomorrow. -Teacher Chloe Dear [Name], >>CorrectGood morning! >>CorrectI have some questions about the invoice of licence revenues January 2012. >> I have some questions about the invoice of licence revenues for January 2012. I received the invoice of licence revenues from Mrs. [Name]. >> I received the invoice licence revenues from Mrs. [Name]. The invoice number is 92609231. >>CorrectAs I understood, we have a small overpaied / overcharged amount end of 2011 of arround 15,000.00EUR. >> As I understood, we have a few overpaid and overcharged amount by the end of 2011 of arround 15,000.00EUR. So, the overcharged amount will be Jan.2012 and we can pay licenses again from february 2012. >> So, the overcharged amount will be paid on January 2012 and so we will pay licenses again from February 2012. Please refer to the below e-mail and please give me an answer. >>Please check this and please give me an answer.I\'m looking forward for your reply. >>CorrectThank you for your help. >>Correct  

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