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Make sentences using these words:
1. pressure
These days my pressure is money.
2. unreasonable
only women pregnant is unreasonable. men must know women is hard. ㅜㅜ
3. molehill
I have naver seen the molehill.
I  first look the expression 'make a mountain out of molehill'
There may be a old story conected this expression.
4. pile
When I was a little girl , I played with piling sand.
5. vent
I often  watch a sad movie and vent the cry .
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan,
Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it. See you later.
T.Faye
Here are your corrections:
Make sentences using these words:1. pressureThese days my pressure is money.>>These days I am pressured by money.2. unreasonableonly women pregnant is unreasonable. men must know women is hard. ㅜㅜ>>Only pregnant women are unreasonable. Men must know that it is hard.3. molehillI have naver seen the molehill.>>I have never seen a molehill.
first look the expression \'make a mountain out of molehill\'
>>I looked at the expression, \'make a mountain out of molehill\'.There may be a old story conected this expression.>>There may be an old story connected to this expression.4. pileWhen I was a little girl , I played with piling sand.>>Correct!5. ventI often  watch a sad movie and vent the cry .
>>I often watch a sad movie and vent out.
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