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2012-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Make sentences using these words: 1. pressure These days my pressure is money. 2. unreasonable only women pregnant is unreasonable. men must know women is hard. ㅜㅜ 3. molehill I have naver seen the molehill. I  first look the expression 'make a mountain out of molehill' There may be a old story conected this expression. 4. pile When I was a little girl , I played with piling sand. 5. vent I often  watch a sad movie and vent the cry .

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Hello Susan, Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it. See you later. T.Faye Here are your corrections: Make sentences using these words:1. pressureThese days my pressure is money.>>These days I am pressured by money.2. unreasonableonly women pregnant is unreasonable. men must know women is hard. ㅜㅜ>>Only pregnant women are unreasonable. Men must know that it is hard.3. molehillI have naver seen the molehill.>>I have never seen a molehill. first look the expression \'make a mountain out of molehill\' >>I looked at the expression, \'make a mountain out of molehill\'.There may be a old story conected this expression.>>There may be an old story connected to this expression.4. pileWhen I was a little girl , I played with piling sand.>>Correct!5. ventI often  watch a sad movie and vent the cry . >>I often watch a sad movie and vent out.

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