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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
I've check the every invoices in your side.
There are the invoices that we already paid last month in your data.
I've mark the red line the invoices that we paid on 19.Jan.2012.
Please check your bank transfer list.
If you delete the all of paid datas in your side, the balance will be matched us.
Thank you for your help.
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Here are my corrections:
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>> Correct!Good morning!
>>> Correct!I\'ve check the every invoices in your side.
>>> I\'ve checked every invoices in your side.There are the invoices that we already paid last month in your data.
>>> Its the invoices that we already paid last month.I\'ve mark the red line the invoices that we paid on 19.Jan.2012.
>>> I\'ve put a red line mark to the invoices that we paid on the date, January 19 2012.Please check your bank transfer list.
>>> Correct!If you delete the all of paid datas in your side, the balance will be matched us.
>>> If you deleted all the paid data in your side, the balance will still match ours.Thank you for your help.
>>> Thank you for your cooperation.
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