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Dear [Name]. [Name], Thank you for your information. Can I ask the reason why delay the transfer the payment to your bank. I think the reason is national holiday for new year's day. but Chinese national holiday was just 3days. It was enough time for transfer to your bank even if Chinese have the national holiday. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

Hello Bella! Here are my corrections dear. Please check it out! See you later. -T. Chloe   Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CorrectThank you for your information.>>CorrectCan I ask the reason why delay the transfer the payment to your bank. think the reason is national holiday for new year\'s day. but Chinese national holiday was just 3days.>>I want to know the reason why the transfer of payment  for your bank had been delayed.It was enough time for transfer to your bank even if Chinese have the national holiday.>>I think there was enough time to transfer it though it was your holiday.I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>CorrectThank you. >>Correct