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Dear [Name]. [Name], I have some bad news. Unfortunally, I have a lump in my uterus. The lump is getting bicer than last month. If I leave the lump in my uterus, I will extremely painful. So I decided the surgery that terminate the lump in my uterus. The surgery that terminate the lump in my uterus will do on next Friday. (Feb.17.2012). Dr. advice me to take a rest aleast 2weeks. I discussed about delegation and backup plan of my job with Mr.SK. This is the backup plan while we can't come to work to the office. I will do my job until next Wed. Maybe there are some work to do IR using MIRO. I will teach Ms.Lee how to post the invoice in MIRO for payment. I think she can post the invoice for payment. And Payment will be Okay. So I will request the vacation from 16.Feb.2012~27.Feb.2012. How about it?

Hi Bella. This is my correction. Please read them. I hope that your surgery will be a success. I will call you again tomorrow. ~t.Chloe Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CorrectI have some bad news. >>CorrectUnfortunally, I have a lump in my uterus. >> Unfortunately, I have a lump in my uterus. The lump is getting bicer than last month. >> The lump is getting bigger than last month. If I leave the lump in my uterus, I will extremely painful. >> If I leave the lump in my uterus, it will be extremely painful.So I decided the surgery that terminate the lump in my uterus. >> So I decided to take the surgery that will remove the lump in my uterus.The surgery that terminate the lump in my uterus will do on next Friday. (Feb.17.2012). >> The surgery that will remove the lump in my uterus is scheduled next Friday (Feb.17.2012).Dr. advice me to take a rest aleast 2weeks. >> The Dr. advice me to take a rest aleast 2weeks.I discussed about delegation and backup plan of my job with Mr.SK. >> I discussed the delegation and the backup plan of my job with Mr. [Name].This is the backup plan while we can\'t come to work to the office.I will do my job until next Wed. >> I will return to work until after next week Wednesday.  Maybe there are some work to do IR using MIRO. >> Maybe there are some works to do on IR using MIRO.I will teach Ms.Lee how to post the invoice in MIRO for payment. >> Correct!  I think she can post the invoice for payment. >> Correct!  And Payment will be Okay. >> And I think the payment will be okay.So I will request the vacation from 16.Feb.2012~27.Feb.2012. >> So I am asking for a sick leave from February 16 to February 27.How about it? >> Correct!     >> >> Correct!