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2012-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Example: Martina (go) to England last year. 1.I got home and found that someone _try_ (try) to break into the house. 2. I celebrated last Friday night because I _have passed_ (pass) my exams the day before. 3. I saw a bad accident on my way here. Two cars _has crashed_(crash) on the crossroads. 4. I got to the cinema and a minute later the film _was satarted_ (start). 5. I got to the cinema and and saw that the film _already started_ (already/start) . 1. Please remind (I/call) Mr. [Name] tomorrow morning. (remind call me) 2. Please tell (he/not/smoke) here - it's not allowed. (tell him no smoking 3. Marta didn't feel too good but we persuaded (she/come) to the party. ( her come) 4. Nobody wanted to go to the conference but our boss forced (we/go) to it. (us go) 5. I asked (she/not/call) so late in the evening. I go to bed early. (no call to her) 6. We showed (they/how/use) the new equipment. (them how to use)

강사 첨삭

Hello Bella! Happy Monday!  Here are my corrections for your homework. JOB WELL DONE!  Anyway, I will call you later and I think we could talk about your date last Thursday. KKK. -Teacher Chloe   Example: Martina (go) to England last year.1.I got home and found that someone _try_ (try) to break into the house. >> I got home and found that someone had tried to break into the house. >> I got home and found that someone tried to break into the house.2. I celebrated last Friday night because I _have passed_ (pass) my exams the day before. >> I celebrated last Friday night because had passed my exams the day before. >> I celebrated last Friday night because passed my exams the day before.3. I saw a bad accident on my way here. Two cars _has crashed_(crash) on the crossroads. >> I saw a bad accident on my way here. Two cars had crashed on the crossroads. >> I saw a bad accident on my way here. Two cars crashed on the crossroads.4. I got to the cinema and a minute later the film _was satarted_ (start). >> I got to the cinema and a minute later the film started.5. I got to the cinema and and saw that the film _already started_ (already/start) . >>I got to the cinema and and saw that the film already started. 1. Please remind (I/call) Mr. [Name] tomorrow morning. (remind call me) >>Please remind me to call Mr. [Name] tomorrow morning.2. Please tell (he/not/smoke) here - it\'s not allowed. (tell him no smoking >>Please tell him not to smoke here. It is not allowed.3. Marta didn\'t feel too good but we persuaded (she/come) to the party. ( her come) >>Marta didn\'t feel too good but we persuaded her to come the party.4. Nobody wanted to go to the conference but our boss forced (we/go) to it. (us go) >> Nobody wanted to go to the conference but our boss forced us to go to it.5. I asked (she/not/call) so late in the evening. I go to bed early. (no call to her) >> I asked her not to call so late in the evening. I go to bed early.6. We showed (they/how/use) the new equipment. (them how to use) >>We showed them how to use the new equipment.

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