Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks again for sending in your homework! Have fun on your vacation with your husband. Take lots of pictures okay? ^.^ I hope that you will also enjoy Valentine's day tomorrow! I will miss talking to you T.T Don't worry, I will still talk to you next week okay? Take care dear! I will call you again next week!
~t.Karen ^.^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Make a composition answering the following question: \"Valentines day is tomorrow! How will you show your love and gratitude to your loved ones and to your family? ^.^\"
Valentines is very interesting day but somtimes it\'s very burden day to someone who don\'t have any girlfriends or boyfriends for giving the chocolates on the day.
>> Valentines is a very interesting day but somtimes it\'s a burden to someone who doesn't have any girlfriend or boyfriend to give chocolates to on that day.
I didn\'t decide the method to show my gratitution.
>> I haven't decided how I want to show my gratitude to my husband.
Because tomorros I am going to travel for 1 week so I have to do somthing a lot.^^;;
>> Because tomorrow I am going to travel for 1 week so I have to do a lot of things.^^;;
===============================================================
Have a good weekend and let\'s talk next week.
>> Correct!
I hope I talk to Karen again from come back later a week.
>> I hope I can talk to you again when I come back a week later.
Or
>> I hope I can talk to you again when I come back next week.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.