Composition

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Make a composition based on the following situation: If you had one free day to do anything you want, what would you do? ===================================================================== If I had one free day to do anything I want , I will go to the future. I want to see the my future. If the futher isn’t good I want to change my life way. If there are some problems in the future I could correct to right. But I can’t know that the result of my future life so I don’t know if my current life is correct. Someday when I watched the movie ‘Back to the future’ , I thougt that I were the actor I what can I do ?

Hello there again [이름]. Here is the correction in your composition. I think it would be interesting to know how I would look like in the future ^.^ Since we can\'t go to the future, I hope and pray that you will have a very happy and fulfilling life! Good luck with everything. ^^ ~t.Karen >o< If I had one free day to do anything I want , I will go to the future. >> Correct! I want to see the my future. >> I want to see my future. or  >> I want to see the future.  If the futher isn\'t good I want to change my life way. >> If the future isn\'t good, I want to change my way of life. If there are some problems in the future I could correct to right. >> If there are some problems, if I go to the future, I can correct them to make them right. But I can\'t know that the result of my future life so I don\'t know if my current life is correct. >> But I don\'t know what my future life is like so I don\'t know if my current life is good.