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Dear all, I prepared a celebration graduation of gift for Ms. [Name]. The graduation gift was 83,000KRW of compact foundation of Guerlain. I would like to inform you that our share for the present is .... Mr. [Name]------->20,000KRW Mr.Lee--------->18,000KRW Ms.Kim--------->15,000KRW Ms.Cha-------->10,000KRW Mrs.Min-------->10,000KRW Ms.Yu--------->10,000KRW If don't agree with the given amount please feel free to contact me. Otherwise, if you would agree please hand me in the given amount in cash if it is fine with you. Give me a ring if you have questions with regards to this matter. Thank you for your help. :-)

Hi there! Thanks for your composition. I checked it and here are my corrections. Happy Valentine\'s Day! ~Teacher Chloe~ Dear all, >> Dear everyone, OR  >> To everyone,I prepared a celebration graduation of gift for Ms. [Name]. >> I prepared a graduation gift for Ms. [Name].The graduation gift was 83,000KRW of compact foundation of Guerlain. >> The graduation gift is a compact foundation from Guerlain worth KRW 83,000.I would like to inform you that our share for the present is ....>> correctMr. Ziehr------->20,000KRW >> correctMr.Lee--------->18,000KRW >> correctMs.Kim--------->15,000KRW >> correctMs.Cha-------->10,000KRW >> correctMrs.Min-------->10,000KRW >> correctMs.Yu--------->10,000KRW >> correctIf don\'t agree with the given amount please feel free to contact me. >> correctOtherwise, if you would agree please hand me in the given amount in cash if it is fine with you. >> If you do agree with the given amount then please hand it to me immediately.Give me a ring if you have questions with regards to this matter. >> correctThank you for your help. :-) >> correct