Composition

Hume who injured on his right sholder from wind surfing accident when he was young, recovered his pain and won with left hand. Hume plays tennis everyday as hobby that helped to do away with stereotype.The beautiful Lake Baikal in Southern Siberia, Russia, is the largest freshwater lake in Asia and the deepest in the world. This unique lake is surrounded by mountains and protected by national park.

Hi Sophia!! ^^ Thank you for your composition. You did great. I provided you some corrections on your sentences. See you in class. Take care!^^ __Teacher Nica__   Hume who injured on his right sholder from wind surfing accident when he was young, recovered his pain and won with left hand. >> Correct! Hume plays tennis everyday as hobby that helped to do away with stereotype. >> Hume plays tennis everyday as his hobby that helped to do away with stereotyping. The beautiful Lake Baikal in Southern Siberia, Russia, is the largest freshwater lake in Asia and the deepest in the world. >> Correct! This unique lake is surrounded by mountains and protected by national park. >> Correct!