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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Nice to meet you.
I'm [이름][이름] you from Behr korea.
I'm responsible for Account Payable.
I have joined in to the Behr Korea last 2010.
If you have questions about AP, please feel free to contact me.
Welcome to Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bella! Wow good job! You are improving in written English. Anyway my dear, here are my correcions. Check it please. I will call you later my dear. I miss you! Enjoy working!
-Teacher Chloe
Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CorrectNice to meet you.
>>CorrectI\'m [이름][이름] you from Behr korea.
>> I\'m [이름][이름] you from Behr Korea.I\'m responsible for Account Payable.
>> I\'m responsible for accounts payable.I have joined in to the Behr Korea last 2010.
>> I started to work for Behr Korea last 2010.If you have questions about AP, please feel free to contact me.
>>CorrectWelcome to Korea.
>>Correct
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