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2012-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1) If it __is rain__ (to rain), the children __will not go__ (not/to go) for a walk. 2) If she __do not read__ (not/to read) the novel, she __will can not pass___ (not/to pass) the literature test. 3) If I __do not argue__ (not/to argue) with my father, he __will lend__ (to lend) me his motorbike. 4) If we __take__ (to take) the bus, we __will can not arrive__ (not/to arrive) in time. 5) If Dick __not buy___ (not/to buy) the book, his friends __will be__ (to be) angry with him. 1) My friend is good __for___ playing volleyball. 2) She complains __on___ bullying. 3) They are afraid __to___ losing the match. 4) She doesn't feel __for___ working on the computer. 5) We are looking forward __for___ going out at the weekend.

강사 첨삭

My dear Bella! Thank you for this composition. You did GOOD on your first homework. GOOD JOB!  Please check my corrections. I will call you later my dear. Take care and enjoy working! See you! -Teacher Chloe               1)If it __is rain__ (to rain), the children __will not go__ (not/to go) for a walk. >> If it rains, the children will not go for a walk. 2) If she __do not read__ (not/to read) the novel, she __will can not pass___ (not/to pass) the literature test. >> If she does not read the novel, she will not pass the literature test. 3) If I __do not argue__ (not/to argue) with my father, he __will lend__ (to lend) me his motorbike. >> If I do not argue with my father, he will lend me his motorbike. 4) If we __take__ (to take) the bus, we __will can not arrive__ (not/to arrive) in time. >> If we take the bus, we will not arrive in time.5) If Dick __not buy___ (not/to buy) the book, his friends __will be__ (to be) angry with him. >>If Dick does not buy the book, his friends will be angry with him.1) My friend is good __for___ playing volleyball. >>My friend is good at playing volleyball.2) She complains __on___ bullying. >>She complains about bullying.3) They are afraid __to___ losing the match. >>They are afraid of losing the match.4) She doesn\'t feel __for___ working on the computer. >>She doesn\'t feel like working on the computer.5) We are looking forward __for___ going out at the weekend. >>We are looking forward to going out at the weekend.

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