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-Small companies cannot successfully compete with large companies.-
I agree with that opinion. Let me give reasons and details.
First of all, generally large companies have huge capital power. To be specific, if their goods need advertising, they can use their money on advertisement in various ways such as TV or the radio.
Second, most of the large companies have their loyal customers. For example, Apple has their enthusiastic supporters. They are willing to try apple’s new stuff and give feedbacks. It’s very helpful for companies’ long-term growth.
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Small companies cannot successfully compete with large companies.-I agree with that opinion. Let me give reasons and details.
>>Correct!First of all, generally large companies have huge capital power.
>>First of call, general large companies have huge capital power.
To be specific, if their goods need advertising, they can use their money on advertisement in various ways such as TV or the radio.
>>Correct!Second, most of the large companies have their loyal customers.
>>Secondly, most of the large companies have their loyal companies.
For example, Apple has their enthusiastic supporters.
>>For example, the Apple company has their enthusiastic supporters.
They are willing to try apple\'s new stuff and give feedbacks.
>>They are willing to try new products and give feedbacks as well.
It\'s very helpful for companies\' long-term growth.
>>It\'s very helpful for companies for their continuous growth.
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