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2012-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Dianne! :D I am happy! Because, my work-time is almost over! haha !! Anyways, today I have been studying about 'Present Perfect Continuous and Present Perfect Simple' and I have written some sentences. Please check it. :D * I have been studying English since 2009. I have been studying English for 4 years. * I have been working here since April 2011. * I have been participating the Mathematics competition since I was 10 years. I has won a lot of times. * How long have you been teaching English? * How many have students have you taught? * Min, how long have you been saving for your tuition? Min, how much money have you saved? * I have been living in Seoul since 2006. I have lived in Seoul for 6 years. * Min, have you always lived in Korea? : Yes, I have.

강사 첨삭

Hi Min! Thank you for sharing your composition again, and you did a great job! It only means that you\'re really passionate in learning the language. Keep it up! Here are your corrections: T. Dianne^^ Hi, Dianne! :D >>Hi Dianne! :DI am happy! Because my work-time is almost over! haha !! >>CORRECTAnyways, today I have been studying about \'Present Perfect Continuous and Present Perfect Simple\' and I have written some sentences. >>CORRECTPlease check it. :D >>CORRECT* I have been studying English since 2009. >>CORRECTI have been studying English for 4 years. >>CORRECT* I have been working here since April 2011. >>CORRECT* I have been participating the Mathematics competition since I was 10 years. >>I have been participating the Mathematics competition since I was 10 years.I has won a lot of times. >>I had won a lot of times.* How long have you been teaching English? >>CORRECT* How many have students have you taught? >>How many students have you taught?* Min, how long have you been saving for your tuition? >>CORRECTMin, how much money have you saved?>>CORRECT* I have been living in Seoul since 2006. >>CORRECTI have lived in Seoul for 6 years. >>CORRECT* Min, have you always lived in Korea? >>CORRECT: Yes, I have. >>CORRECT

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