composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name], Maria Cordes,
Good mornig!
We had zero AP at year end 2011 to Mahle Donghyun Filter System for the seoul office rental.
Because the payment term of Mahle Donghyun filter System is payment in advance.
So we already paid all of AP about Mahle Donghyun Filter System by 12.31.2011.
The total cost of Mahle Donghyun Filter System is 15,620,000KRW as per 12.31.2011.
And we had no receivables as per 12.31.2011.
If you have any question, Please feel free to contact me.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sending me your composition. HAve a nice day!Teacher ChloeHere are some corrections for you:Dear [Name], Maria Cordes,>>Dear [Name]. [Name] and Ms. [Name],Good mornig!>>Good morning!We had zero AP at year end 2011 to Mahle Donghyun Filter System for the seoul office rental.>>We had zero AP at the end of the year for 2011 at Mahle Donghyun Filter System for the Seoul office rental.Because the payment term of Mahle Donghyun filter System is payment in advance.>>Because we paid the term for Mahle Donghyun filter System rental in advance.So we already paid all of AP about Mahle Donghyun Filter System by 12.31.2011.>>So we had already paid all of the APs of Mahle Donghyun Filter System on 12.31.2011.The total cost of Mahle Donghyun Filter System is 15,620,000KRW as per 12.31.2011. >>The total cost of Mahle Donghyun Filter System is 15,620,000KRW as per annum. And we had no receivables as per 12.31.2011.>>And we had no receivables as per year.If you have any question, Please feel free to contact me.>>If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.Thank you. >>Correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.