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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].Nathalie Tousch,
Good afternoon!
We have import declaration certificate issed by Busan Customs office from Panalpina.
Please see the attached file that you need.
If you have any questions please let me know.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
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Dear [Name].Nathalie Tousch,>> correct
OR >> Dear [Name]. [Name],Good afternoon!>> correctWe have import declaration certificate issed by Busan Customs office from Panalpina.>> We have an import declaration certificate issued by the Busan Customs office from Panalpina.Please see the attached file that you need.>> correctIf you have any questions please let me know.>> correctThank you.
>> correct
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