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2012-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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When I watched the hearing of member of Congress on TV, I felt he turns a blind eye on the questions sucsh as "Why you don't go to the Army".

강사 첨삭

Hey there Mr. [Name]! Very good idiom usage. I\'m very impressed. I hope I could read more sentences from you. Keep it up!

~Teacher Marie~

When I watched the hearing of member of Congress on TV, I felt he turns a blind eye on the questions sucsh as \"Why you don\'t go to the Army\".

>>When I watched the hearing of a member of the Congress on TV, I felt like he was turning a blind eye on some questions such as, \"Why did you not go to the Army?\"

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