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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].Ziehr,
Good afternoon!
I have a question about cost center and G/L accounts number of overhead costs .
I received the invoice of overhead costs February 2012 from BG.
The Office Paris's cost didn't encloded in this overhead costs.
Until last month, we used the G/L account of 42000100 ( Technical support ) and 107068 ( Sales).
Please see the details.
Can I use which the cost center?
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
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-Teacher Chloe
Dear [Name].Ziehr,
>>Correct Good afternoon!
>>Correct I have a question about cost center and G/L accounts number of overhead costs .
>> I have a question about the cost center and G/L accounts number of overhead costs.I received the invoice of overhead costs February 2012 from BG.
>> I received the invoice of overhead costs last February 2012 from BG.The Office Paris\'s cost didn\'t encloded in this overhead costs.
>>The Office in Paris costs did not include costs.Until last month, we used the G/L account of 42000100 ( Technical support ) and 107068 ( Sales).
>>Correct Please see the details.
>>Correct Can I use which the cost center?
>>Can I use the cost center?I\'m looking forward for your reply.
>>Correct
Thank you.
>>Correct
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