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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Sir and Madam,
Good afternoon!
First of all, many thanks for your cooperation.
However, replacement is not allowed in Korea law.
In addition, Korean Financial Supervisory Service noticed that netting & deduct debit note from account receivable
is not allowed.
It means we have to receive the amount of debit note from your side.
The replacement of these goods that you already sent to ourside will be narmal goods and we will pay to you whin payment term.
I would like you to check and let me know the payment schedule asap.
If you need further information, please feel free contact me by return.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
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Dear Sir and Madam,
>> Correct.Good afternoon!>> Correct.First of all, many thanks for your cooperation.>> First of all, I would like to thank you for your cooperation.However, replacement is not allowed in Korea law.>> However, replacement is not allowed in Korean Law.In addition, Korean Financial Supervisory Service noticed that netting & deduct debit note from account receivable is not allowed. >> In addition, Korean Financial Supervisory Service noticed that netting and deducting debit from the account receivable are not allowed.It means we have to receive the amount of debit note from your side.>> Correct.The replacement of these goods that you already sent to ourside will be narmal goods and we will pay to you whin payment term.>> The replacement of these goods that you already sent out will be normal goods and we will pay you within the payment term.I would like you to check and let me know the payment schedule asap. >> Correct.If you need further information, please feel free contact me by return. >> If you need further information, please feel free to contact me.Thank you.
>> Correct.
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