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2012-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I have some questions about this invoice. Would you please give me some details if you have it? If you don't have any details, please give me a contact person from GmbH that I can request the details about iCAC prototypes and single components. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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Amazing content on your composition. Just work on your prepositions and I\'m sure you\'ll do better next time. Talk to you later then.^^   Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct!Good morning!>>Correct!I have some questions about this invoice.>>Correct!Would you please give me some details if you have it?>>Correct!If you don\'t have any details, please give me a contact person from GmbH that I can request the details about iCAC prototypes and single components.>>If you don\'t have any details, will you kindly give me a contact person from GmbH who I could request the details abou iCAC prototypes and single components.I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>I\'m looking forward to your reply.Thank you. >>Correct!

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