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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear all,
Good morning!
First of all, sorry for the no chat to the invoices.
I knew that no tick is no payment in Bellin netting.
So I didn't tick these invoices means we will not pay on March.
Unfortunately, we can pay these invoices 2weeks later after coming back Mr. [Name].
Mr. [Name] is will in Germany for 2 weeks.
If you have any questions please let me know.
Thank you.
I've checked the payment condition them free of charge after sending e-mail to you.
Thank you for your information.
OK! BKO will pay only shippment as your mention.
강사 첨삭
Hello Dear!
Thank you for doing a composition. I appreciate it. See you later!
Teacher Chloe
Here are your corrections:
Dear all,
>>To whom this may concern:Good morning!
>>Correct!First of all, sorry for the no chat to the invoices.
>>Correct!I knew that no tick is no payment in Bellin netting.
>>I knew that no tick means no payment in Bellin netting.So I didn\'t tick these invoices means we will not pay on March.
>>So I didn't tick these invoices meaning we will not pay for March.Unfortunately, we can pay these invoices 2weeks later after coming back Mr. [Name].
>>Unfortunately, we can pay these invoices 2 weeks after Mr. [Name] comes back.Mr. [Name] is will in Germany for 2 weeks.
>>Mr. [Name] will be in Germany for 2 weeks.If you have any questions please let me know.
>>Correct!Thank you.>>Correct!I\'ve checked the payment condition them free of charge after sending e-mail to you.
>>I've checked the payment for them free of charge after sending you the e-mail.Thank you for your information.
>>Correct!OK! BKO will pay only shippment as your mention.
>>OK! BKO will only pay the shipment as what you mentioned.
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