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2012-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Dear all, Good morning! First of all, sorry for the no chat to the invoices. I knew that no tick is no payment in Bellin netting. So I didn't tick these invoices means we will not pay on March. Unfortunately, we can pay these invoices 2weeks later after coming back Mr. [Name]. Mr. [Name] is will in Germany for 2 weeks. If you have any questions please let me know. Thank you. I've checked the payment condition them free of charge after sending e-mail to you. Thank you for your information. OK! BKO will pay only shippment as your mention.

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Hello Dear! Thank you for doing a composition. I appreciate it. See you later! Teacher Chloe Here are your corrections: Dear all, >>To whom this may concern:Good morning! >>Correct!First of all, sorry for the no chat to the invoices. >>Correct!I knew that no tick is no payment in Bellin netting. >>I knew that no tick means no payment in Bellin netting.So I didn\'t tick these invoices means we will not pay on March. >>So I didn't tick these invoices meaning we will not pay for March.Unfortunately, we can pay these invoices 2weeks later after coming back Mr. [Name]. >>Unfortunately, we can pay these invoices 2 weeks after Mr. [Name] comes back.Mr. [Name] is will in Germany for 2 weeks. >>Mr. [Name] will be in Germany for 2 weeks.If you have any questions please let me know. >>Correct!Thank you.>>Correct!I\'ve checked the payment condition them free of charge after sending e-mail to you. >>I've checked the payment for them free of charge after sending you the e-mail.Thank you for your information. >>Correct!OK! BKO will pay only shippment as your mention. >>OK! BKO will only pay the shipment as what you mentioned.

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