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2012-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I have some questions about IC balances. I've check the IC balances with SBTS's. But you didn't upload the invoice for this month that I already sent you.(135,000USD) Do you have any reasons why didn't upload it? I hope that you can see the this e-mail before closing the March. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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Hi!! ^_^ Thank you for your composition. You did great!  I provided some corrections on some of your sentences. Please find time to check it. See you in class. Take care! ^-^ __Teacher Chloe__     Dear [Name]. [Name], >> Correct!Good morning! >> Correct!I have some questions about IC balances. >> Correct!I\'ve check the IC balances with SBTS\'s. >> Correct!But you didn\'t upload the invoice for this month that I already sent you.(135,000USD) >> Correct!Do you have any reasons why didn\'t upload it? >> Do you have reasons why you didn\'t upload it?I hope that you can see the this e-mail before closing the March. >> I hope you could read this email before the end of March.I\'m looking forward for your reply. >> Correct!Thank you. >> Correct!    

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