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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
I have some questions about IC balances.
I've check the IC balances with SBTS's.
But you didn't upload the invoice for this month that I already sent you.(135,000USD)
Do you have any reasons why didn't upload it?
I hope that you can see the this e-mail before closing the March.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi!! ^_^
Thank you for your composition. You did great! I provided some corrections on some of your sentences. Please find time to check it. See you in class. Take care! ^-^
__Teacher Chloe__
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct!Good morning!
>> Correct!I have some questions about IC balances.
>> Correct!I\'ve check the IC balances with SBTS\'s.
>> Correct!But you didn\'t upload the invoice for this month that I already sent you.(135,000USD)
>> Correct!Do you have any reasons why didn\'t upload it?
>> Do you have reasons why you didn\'t upload it?I hope that you can see the this e-mail before closing the March.
>> I hope you could read this email before the end of March.I\'m looking forward for your reply.
>> Correct!Thank you.
>> Correct!
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