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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear all,
Would you please give me an answer about unit prices?
Because Bellin IC balance will be close today.
We don't have time any more.
Maybe the unit prices are changed,Bellin IC balance will be change!
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Bella! How are doing? I hope you are okay. Kiki! Here are my corrections for your composition my dear. Check it out and I think you can already send this message to your colleagues. I will talk to you later my dear. Bye bye for now!
-Teacher Chloe
Dear all,>>Dear Sir/Ma'am,Would you please give me an answer about unit prices?
>>Could you please give me any details about the unit prices?Because Bellin IC balance will be close today. We don\'t have time any more.
>>We don't have any time anymore because Bellin IC balance will be close today.Maybe the unit prices are changed, Bellin IC balance will be change!
>>It is possible that the unit prices will be changed and Bellin IC balance will be changed too.Thank you.
>>Correct
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