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Dear [Name],
Good morning!
We have some troble of IC balance.
I know that Bellin already closed .
Although we try to contact responsible from BIL. Nobody give us an answer from BIL.
But we received the invoices of 84.00 USD today early in the morning from BIL.
Ms. [Name] su[이름] was confirmed what are these invoices.
We have to upload the datas in IC Balance.
We received the invoices of 84USD . BIL uploaded the datas 82.91USD in IC Balance.
Ms. [Name] su[이름] is confirming correct prices with BIL.
Do you have any solution to upload the data in IC balance?
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you.
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Dear [Name],
>>Correct!Good morning!
>>Correct!We have some troble of IC balance.
>>We have some trouble on the IC balance.I know that Bellin already closed .
>>I know that Bellin is already closed.Although we try to contact responsible from BIL. Nobody give us an answer from BIL.
>>We tried to contact the person responsible from BIL but nobody answered our call.But we received the invoices of 84.00 USD today early in the morning from BIL.
>>Correct!Ms. [Name] su[이름] was confirmed what are these invoices.
>>Ms. [Name][이름] confirmed what these invoices are.We have to upload the datas in IC Balance.
>>We have to upload the data in IC Balance.We received the invoices of 84USD .
>>We received the invoices worth 84USD.
BIL uploaded the datas 82.91USD in IC Balance.
>>BIL uploaded the 82.91USD data in the IC Balance.Ms. [Name] su[이름] is confirming correct prices with BIL.
>>Ms. [Name][이름] is currently confirming the correct prices with BIL.Do you have any solution to upload the data in IC balance?
>>Do you have any solutions regarding the uploading of data in IC balance?
>>Can you suggest any solutions to this problem?I\'m looking forward for your reply.
>>Correct!Thank you
>>Thank you.
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