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Dear [Name], Good morning! We confirmed what this data is. BIL said that this data is HBPO KR not BKO. BIL was enter the wrong client. BIL said that HBPO is correct. Would you please delete the this data in our side? Thank you again!

Hi there! Awesome job on your homework. You\'ve got good construction of sentences. Just be careful with your be-verbs and prepositions.   Dear [Name], >>Correct!Good morning!>>Correct! We confirmed what this data is.>>Correct! BIL said that this data is HBPO KR not BKO.>>Correct! BIL was enter the wrong client. >>BIL entered the wrong client.BIL said that HBPO is correct. >>Correct!Would you please delete the this data in our side?>>Would you please delete this data from our side? Thank you again! >> Correct!