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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! How was your Germany life? I hope you had a great time. :-) I received your postal matter from Germany. Would you please give me an address that you can receive this postal matter. I will send the postal matter for you if you give me an address that you can receive this postal matter. Thank you.

Thanks once again for being so diligent in doing your homework. There are a few suggestions I\'ve written down. Hope it helps.   Dear [Name]. [Name], >>Correct!Good morning!>>Correct! How was your Germany life? >>How was your life in Germany?  I hope you had a great time. :-)>>Correct! I received your postal matter from Germany. >>Correct!Would you please give me an address that you can receive this postal matter.>>Would you please give me an address where you can receive this postal matter? I will send the postal matter for you if you give me an address that you can receive this postal matter.>>I\'ll try to send something to you through that address.Thank you. >> Correct!