composition

Dear [Name]! An nyoung! <--- It means "Hi" in korean. I arrived back safely yesterday in Korea and am happy to see my family. China is a very nice place to live in, I will miss it allot. I had fun with you!!! I wish to go to Stuttgart and looking forward to see you again! Thank you, for taking me out, I had a good time. Take care! :-) Bye!Bye!

Hello! Thank you for completing your composition. Good job! Because you were able to express your ideas. However I noticed some grammar errors. Be cautious also with your punctuation marks. I suggest you to practice more in constructing your sentences for you to get better. Keep it up! Teacher Cam^^ Dear [Name]! >>Dear [Name], An nyoung! <--- It means \"Hi\" in korean. >> An nyoung! <--- It means \"Hi\" in Korean language. I arrived back safely yesterday in Korea and am happy to see my family. >> correct China is a very nice place to live in, I will miss it allot.  >> China is a very nice place to live in, I will miss it a lot I had fun with you!!! >>correct >>I had a lot of fun with you. I wish to go to Stuttgart and looking forward to see you again! >> I wish to go to Stuttgart and I am looking forward to see you again! Thank you, for taking me out, I had a good time. >> correctTake care! :-) Bye!Bye! >>CORRECT