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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
I arrived back safely the day before yesterday in Korea and I'm better now.
Sorry for the late email because I have to has works to do.
China is a very nice place to live in , I will miss it a lot.
Thank you again for taking me out.
It was fun, drinking all the different kinds of beer with you.
I'm looking forward to see you again.
Bye Bye!! :-)
강사 첨삭
Hi there:)Thank you for sending me your composition! You did a very great job!Here are my
corrections!Have a happy weekend!
--Teacher Camille =)
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>correctGood morning!>>correctI arrived back safely the day before yesterday in Korea and I\'m better now.>>correctSorry for the late email because I have to has works to do.>> Sorry for the late email because I have to do a lot of work.China is a very nice place to live in , I will miss it a lot.
>> China is a very nice place to live in , I will miss it a lot.Thank you again for taking me out.>>correctIt was fun, drinking all the different kinds of beer with you.>>correctI\'m looking forward to see you again.>>correctBye Bye!! :-)
>>Correct
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