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2012-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I arrived back safely the day before yesterday in Korea and I'm better now. Sorry for the late email because I have to has works to do. China is a very nice place to live in , I will miss it a lot. Thank you again for taking me out. It was fun, drinking all the different kinds of beer with you. I'm looking forward to see you again. Bye Bye!! :-)

강사 첨삭

Hi there:)Thank you for sending me your composition! You did a very great job!Here are my corrections!Have a happy weekend! --Teacher Camille =) Dear [Name]. [Name], >>correctGood morning!>>correctI arrived back safely the day before yesterday in Korea and I\'m better now.>>correctSorry for the late email because I have to has works to do.>> Sorry for the late email because I have to do a lot of work.China is a very nice place to live in , I will miss it a lot. >> China is a very nice place to live in , I will miss it a lot.Thank you again for taking me out.>>correctIt was fun, drinking all the different kinds of beer with you.>>correctI\'m looking forward to see you again.>>correctBye Bye!! :-) >>Correct

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