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2012-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Dear [Name] Sanchez, Sorry for the late e-mail. The employee of Purchasing department didn't agree about these prices so,we can't pay these invoices. Would you please give me a credit invoices and invoices that the prices we agreed? Korean Financial Supervisory Service noticed that netting & deduct debit note from account receivable or account payable is not allowed. So we can only cancel the invoices of 25162264, 25162265 and 25164252 if we receive the credit invoices from your side. And we will pay the correct invoices if we receive the correct invoices from your side. Dear [Name]. [Name], I'm sorry for the your call. Because I don't have any choice our side. If you got the solution, please contact to Mr. [Name] my boss. Thank you for your help.

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Hi There! How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. Please continue practicing your english skills, your sentence construction, and your tenses. Always remember,\'Trust yourself. You know more than you think you do.\'  Here are my corrections for you.  Good luck and always take care!   Dear [Name] Sanchez, >>Correct.Sorry for the late e-mail. >> Sorry for my late reply to your e-mail.The employee of Purchasing department didn\'t agree about these prices so,we can\'t pay these invoices. >>The employees of the Purcahsing department didn\'t agree to these prices, so we can\'t pay these invoices.Would you please give me a credit invoices and invoices that the prices we agreed? >>Would you please give me a credit invoice and an invoice of the prices we have agreed upon?Korean Financial Supervisory Service noticed that netting & deduct debit note from account receivable or account payable is not allowed. >>The Korean Financial Supervisory Service noted that netting & deduct debit notes from accounts recievable or accounts payable is not allowed. So we can only cancel the invoices of 25162264, 25162265 and 25164252 if we receive the credit invoices from your side. >>Correct.And we will pay the correct invoices if we receive the correct invoices from your side. >> Correct.Dear [Name]. [Name], >>CorrectI\'m sorry for the your call. >> I\'m sorry for not answering your call.Because I don\'t have any choice our side. >>Because I don\'t have a choice.If you got the solution, please contact to Mr. [Name] my boss. >>If you got the solution, please contact my boss; Mr. [Name].Thank you for your help. >>Correct.

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