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2012-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good afternoon! I have some questions about warning message. The warning says : System cannot calculate cash discount base amount ; enter it" Would you please give me an solutions? And I heard that you will come to Korea on 3rd week of May. I'm looking forward to see you again. :-) Thank you!

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Hi there my dear Bella happy Monday! Thank you for your composition. Here are the corrections. Have a nice day and talk to you later my dear.. Teacher Cam^^ Dear [Name], >> CorrectGood afternoon!>> CorrectI have some questions about warning message.>> I have some questions about a warning message.The warning says : System cannot calculate cash discount base amount ; enter it\">> CorrectWould you please give me an solutions?>> Would you please give me a solution?And I heard that you will come to Korea on 3rd week of May.>> I also heard that you will come to Korea on the 3rd week of May.I\'m looking forward to see you again. >> I\'m looking forward to seeing you again.:-) Thank you! >> Correct

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