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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Good afternoon!
Morning and evening is a little cool, afternoon is a little hot.
You have to prepare the umbrella and cardigan and short shirt.
We already wear the sandals.! :-)
Best regards!
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella, thank you for dropping in your composition..:)
Job well done once again..
Talk to you again tomorrow my dear..
Take care always my dear..
Teacher Cam^^
Dear [Name],Good afternoon!Morning and evening is a little cool, afternoon is a little hot.>>correct
>>It\'s a bit cool in the morning and evening, and a bit hot in the afternoon.You have to prepare the umbrella and cardigan and short shirt.>>correctWe already wear the sandals.! :-)>>correctBest regards!
>>correct
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