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2012-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], How was your national holiday? I hope that you had a great time. I found the datas that we didn't matched it in Bellin. First of all, I didn't receive yet the invoices of 23.00Euro and 30.50Euro as seen below. Would you please give me a copy of invoices? Second of all, You didn't uploaded the data of 5,934.16Euro in your side even if we already receive the invoice for check list on Apr. The last of all, Would you please upload the data as seen below about bad smell issue and claims. Please see the attached file. We've issued the debit note for return delivery for the analysis on Apr.30.2012.

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Hello my dear bela, thank you once again for sending your composition.. Once again, good job on writing a letter about your invoice.. Here are the modifications I made.. talk to you later my dear,. Teacher Cam^^ Dear [Name]. [Name],How was your national holiday?>>correctI hope that you had a great time.>>correctI found the datas that we didn\'t matched it in Bellin.>>I found the data that we couldn\'t match in Berlin.First of all, I didn\'t receive yet the invoices of 23.00Euro and 30.50Euro as seen below. >>correctWould you please give me a copy of invoices? >>Would you please give me a copy of those invoices?Second of all, You didn\'t uploaded the data of 5,934.16Euro in your side even if we already receive the invoice for check list on Apr. >>Secons of all, you didn\'t upload the data of 5,934.16 Euro even if we already received the checklist of invoice on April.The last of all, Would you please upload the data as seen below about bad smell issue and claims.>>And lastly, coud you please upload the data as seen below about the sanitary issue and claims.Please see the attached file. >>correctWe\'ve issued the debit note for return delivery for the analysis on Apr.30.2012. >>correct

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