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2012-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 amber

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Thank you for your information Finally all of invoices are match in Bellin. The "12BKTUBE0409 " of invoice's total amount is 28,286.42Euro in your copy of invoices. But the item's total amount is 28,286.43Euro that SBTS uploaded data in Bellin. The 28,286.43Euro is correct one. Am I right? Would you please the removed invoice to 28,286.43Euro? I already retouch the amount in Bellin. Thank you for your help.

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Hello my dear Bella, Thank you for the composition you sent today.. Here are the modifications I made for you.. talk to you again tomorrow and take care  always! Teacher cam^^ Dear [Name]. [Name],Thank you for your information>>correctFinally all of invoices are match in Bellin.>>Finally all invoices matched Bellin.The \"12BKTUBE0409 \" of invoice\'s total amount is 28,286.42Euro in your copy of invoices.>>correctBut the item\'s total amount is 28,286.43Euro that SBTS uploaded data in Bellin.>>correctThe 28,286.43Euro is correct one. Am I right?>>correct >>The 28,286.43Euro is the correct one. Am I right?Would you please the removed invoice to 28,286.43Euro?>>Would you please remove th invoice to 28,286.43 Euro?I already retouch the amount in Bellin. >>I\'ve already retouched theamount in ellin.Thank you for your help. >>correct

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