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Dear [Name]. [Name] fei,
Good afternoon!
Would you please give me a copy of invoces of 4,620Euro?
We already received the invoice about 500Euro of JIG.
But we didn't receive the invoices of 4,620Euro yet.
As I know, we didn't give you the PO number about below issue. Am I right?
Please send me a copy of invoice if you have it.
Otherwise, Mr. [Name] will progress that create the PO number and Mr. [Name] will give you PO number.
After that, we will pay 4620Euro and 500Euro.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you.
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Dear [Name]. [Name] fei,Good afternoon!
>>correctWould you please give me a copy of invoces of 4,620Euro?
>>Would you please give me a copy of the 4,620 Euro invoice?We already received the invoice about 500Euro of JIG.
>>correctBut we didn\'t receive the invoices of 4,620Euro yet.
>>correctAs I know, we didn\'t give you the PO number about below issue. Am I right?
>>As I know, we haven\'t given you the PO number of the issue below, am I right?Please send me a copy of invoice if you have it.
>>correctOtherwise, Mr. [Name] will progress that create the PO number and Mr. [Name] will give you PO number.
>>Otherwise, Mr. [Name] will progress and create the PO number abd Mr. [Name] will give you the PO number.After that, we will pay 4620Euro and 500Euro.
>>correctI\'m looking forward for your reply.
>>correctThank you.
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