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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].Ziehr,
I changed the data in the system.
And Mr. [Name] increased the budget for 4050-12-0014.
We don't have enough time for traning about investment with Mrs.Min.
I think I didn't totally understand it.
But I will do my best.
Please help me Mr. [Name].
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
As usual, your homework is yet again flawless. Day after day, I see big changes on your skills. You should reward yourself for always doing good work. Have fun and I\'ll talk to you later!
T. Cam
Dear [Name].Ziehr,
>>Correct!I changed the data in the system.
>>Correct!And Mr. [Name] increased the budget for 4050-12-0014.
>>Correct!We don\'t have enough time for traning about investment with Mrs.Min.
>>Correct! OR
>>We don\'t have enough time to train with Mrs. [Name] about investment.I think I didn\'t totally understand it.
>>Correct!But I will do my best.
>>Correct!Please help me Mr. [Name].
>>Correct!Thank you.
>>Correct!
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