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2012-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Dear [Name].Ziehr, I changed the data in the system. And Mr. [Name] increased the budget for 4050-12-0014. We don't have enough time for traning about investment with Mrs.Min. I think I didn't totally understand it. But I will do my best. Please help me Mr. [Name]. Thank you.

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As usual, your homework is yet again flawless. Day after day, I see big changes on your skills. You should reward yourself for always doing good work. Have fun and I\'ll talk to you later! T. Cam Dear [Name].Ziehr, >>Correct!I changed the data in the system. >>Correct!And Mr. [Name] increased the budget for 4050-12-0014. >>Correct!We don\'t have enough time for traning about investment with Mrs.Min. >>Correct!  OR >>We don\'t have enough time to train with Mrs. [Name] about investment.I think I didn\'t totally understand it. >>Correct!But I will do my best. >>Correct!Please help me Mr. [Name]. >>Correct!Thank you. >>Correct!

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