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2012-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! I requested the eRO about Marine and cargo insurance for BKP of 2012 using your cost center. Would you please approve the eRO about Marine and cargo insurance today if you receive the eRO approval e-mail. We have to pay the Marine and cargo insurance tomorrow. Thank you for your help.

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An amazing afternoon to you once again! I hope you enjoyed your lunch. Always remember that the ability to concentrate and to use your time well is everything if you want to succeed in business--or almost anywhere else for that matter. xoxoT. Cam Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct!Good afternoon!>>Correct!I requested the eRO about Marine and cargo insurance for BKP of 2012 using your cost center. >>I requested the eRO about Marine and cargo insurance for BKP of 2012 which is using your cost center.Would you please approve the eRO about Marine and cargo insurance today if you receive the eRO approval e-mail. >>Correct!We have to pay the Marine and cargo insurance tomorrow. >>Correct!Thank you for your help. >>Correct!

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