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2012-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! The purchasing said that these invoices has defference of units price with our side. So we couldn't pay these invoices on 25/04/2012. Dear [Name]. [Name], Would you please give me some reply for payment? Thank you for your help.

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It\'s a another awe inspiring day! A very happy Friday to you ^^. I hope you are having a great time at work. Do take note on some vocabularies that I changed on your homework. Have fun this day! T. Cam Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct!Good afternoon!>>Correct!The purchasing said that these invoices has defference of units price with our side.>>The purchasing department said that these invoices have some discrepancy of unit price with our side.So we couldn\'t pay these invoices on 25/04/2012.>>Correct!Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct!Would you please give me some reply for payment?>>Would you please send me a reply about the payment?Thank you for your help. >>Correct!

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