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2012-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name] li, Good afternoon! We have plan for the payment about the invoices for the radiator , folded tube ,PP Training and JIG except the evaporator. Unfortunately, we can't pay the evaporator. The reason is the bad smell issue. Would you please give me a feedback for payment about 135,000USD? We will hold the payment of the evaporator if we have not get the money for 135,000USD. Thank you.

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Hi my dear Bella happy Monday!:) Thank you for sending in your composition today.. Below are the modifications I made on some of your sentences, I hope they could be of big help. Talk to you later my dear and take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear [Name] li,Good afternoon!>>correctWe have plan for the payment about the invoices for the radiator , folded tube ,PP Training and JIG except the evaporator. >>correctUnfortunately, we can\'t pay the evaporator. >>Unfortunately, we cant pay for the evaporator. The reason is the bad smell issue. >>correctWould you please give me a feedback for payment about 135,000USD? >>Would you please gve us feedback regarding the payment of 135,000USD?We will hold the payment of the evaporator if we have not get the money for 135,000USD. >>We will hold the payment of the evaporator if we havent got the 135,000USD paymentThank you.

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