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Dear [Name] li,
I would like to propose that Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name] should discuss this topic.
I'm sorry for that.
But I'd like to check the data that you provided
Please check the red marked line.
The 824584276 of invoice have difference 100Euro with invoice that we received.
And we didn't receive the invoices of 824584281 and 824584283.
Please give me a copy of invoices or more details.
Thank you.
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Hello my dear Bella,
Here are the modifications I made for you..
Good job on writing a letter my dear, keep up the good work!
Take care always my dear..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear [Name] li,
I would like to propose that Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name] should discuss this topic.>>correct
I\'m sorry for that.
>>correctBut I\'d like to check the data that you provided
>>But I\'d like to check the data you\'ve provided.Please check the red marked line.
>>correctThe 824584276 of invoice have difference 100Euro with invoice that we received.>>correct
And we didn\'t receive the invoices of 824584281 and 824584283.>>correct
Please give me a copy of invoices or more details.
>>Please give me a copy of the invoices and the other details.Thank you.
>>correct
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