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2012-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

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Dear [Name], Good morning! How was your Germany life? I hope that you had a great time. We have big big problom about GR posting system. We received the tax local invoice today. It is tax invoice for May. First of all, I have done IR. Second of all requester have done GR that choose the delivery note date and Goods receipt date on 31.May.2012 . But actual GR posting date is 01.Jun.2012 . not May. How to remove the posting date to May in GR posting system? As you know we always receive the local tax invoices started next month. It is very urgent for month end closing. Please give me an answer. Thank you for your help.

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It\'s a beautiful Friday once again. I\'ve listed down corrections as well as suggestion on your composition today. Try to study more on articles so that you\'d know when and when not to use them. If you have any questions, just let me know. T. Cam Dear [Name],>>Correct!Good morning! >>Correct!How was your Germany life? >>Correct! >>How was your life in Germany?I hope that you had a great time. >>Correct!We have big big problom about GR posting system. >>We have a really big problem about GR posting system.We received the tax local invoice today. >>Correct!  It is tax invoice for May. >>It is the tax invoice for May.First of all, I have done IR. >>First of all, I have done the IR.Second of all requester have done GR that choose the delivery note date and Goods receipt date on 31.May.2012 . >>Second of all, the requester have done the GR that chooses the delivery note date and goods receipt date on the 31st of May 2012. >>Second of all, the requester have done the GR and chose the delivery note date and goods receipt date which was on May 31, 2012.But actual GR posting date is 01.Jun.2012 . not May. >>But the actual GR posting date is on 01 Jun 2012 not May.How to remove the posting date to May in GR posting system? >>How to we remove the posting date on May in the GR posting system?As you know we always receive the local tax invoices started next month. >>As you know, we always receive the local tax invoices every month. >>As you know, we will receive the local tax invoices starting next month.It is very urgent for month end closing. >>It is very urgent for the month-end closing.Please give me an answer. >>Correct! >>I\'m looking forward to your immediate reply.Thank you for your help. >>Correct!

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