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2012-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Dear [Name]. 0000 Good afternoon! I'm [이름][이름] Yu from finance of 0000. I received the invoice of Audit against ISO from 000000. Would you please give me a "DUNS Number" for setting the vendor in the our system? For reference, DUNS Number is indigenous number of coperation as internationa business. Kindly understand, we have head queter in the Germay and that is rule of head queter in Germany. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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Hi my dear Bella, happy Monday! Thank you for sending in your composition.. Here are the modifications I made for you regarding your composition.. Take care always and have a good day my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear [Name]. 0000Good afternoon! >>correctI\'m [이름][이름] Yu from finance of 0000. >>correct >>Im [이름][이름] Yu from Finance 0000.I received the invoice of Audit against ISO from 000000. >>correctWould you please give me a \"DUNS Number\" for setting the vendor in the our system? >>correctFor reference, DUNS Number is indigenous number of coperation as internationa business. >>For reference, DUNS Number is indigenous number of coperation as international business.Kindly understand, we have head queter in the Germay and that is rule of head queter in Germany.>>Kindly understand that, that is our policy in our headquarter which is locatedin Germany.I\'m looking forward for your reply. >>correctThank you. >>correct    

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