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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
I have some questions about P-11832-00.
My colleague said that there is no data of P-11832-00 in Korea.
Is it for BehrKorea?
Would you please check the P-11832-00 number again?
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella,
Thank you for dropping in your composition :)
Job well done once again my dear..
Talk to you again on Thursday my dear and take care always..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear [Name]. [Name],Good morning!
>>correctI have some questions about P-11832-00.
>>correctMy colleague said that there is no data of P-11832-00 in Korea.
>>correct
Is it for BehrKorea?>>correct
Would you please check the P-11832-00 number again? >>correct
Thank you for your help.
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