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학생이 쓴 원문
Mr. [Name],
Good afternoon!
How was your business trip?
I requested the eRO for Registration tax and legal fee for capital increase from Chung Jeong lawfirm as seen below.
You can see the attached file in the eRO.
The total amount is 9,736,830KRW.
But the VAT is not 10%, it is contain the 480,000KRW of the registration tax.
So I requested the two eRO that devide the amount Legal fee and the Registration tax.
Please refer to the e-mail.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella,
Thank you for makiing your composition.:)
Here are the modifications I made for you..^^
Enjoy your weekend and take care..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Mr. [Name],Good afternoon!How was your business trip?>>correctI requested the eRO for Registration tax and legal fee for capital increase from Chung Jeong lawfirm as seen below.>>correctYou can see the attached file in the eRO.>>correctThe total amount is 9,736,830KRW.>>correctBut the VAT is not 10%, it is contain the 480,000KRW of the registration tax.>>But the VAT is not 10% it contains 480,000KRW of the registration tax.So I requested the two eRO that devide the amount Legal fee and the Registration tax.>>correct..The correct spelling is DIVIDE..Please refer to the e-mail.>>correctThank you. >>correct
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