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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
I'd like to explain to write the voucher for you.
You can write the date is today but it is not important for the payment.You can write the date May or June.
The first line is debit and second line is credit. So you have to write the same total amount.
And you can remove the description Apr to May.
Because always receipt of telecomunication is cost of last month.
For example, If you got a receipt on July, it must be the cost for June.
It is the reason to different the date of description and upper of voucher.
If you have any questions please let me know.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella, happy Monday!
Thank you so much for making your composition today..
Here are the modifications I made for you..
Take care always and have a good day!!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon!
>>correctI\'d like to explain to write the voucher for you.
>>I\'d like to explain to you how to write a voucher.You can write the date is today but it is not important for the payment.You can write the date May or June.
>>You can write the date today, but its not important for the payment. You can write May or June.The first line is debit and second line is credit. So you have to write the same total amount.
>>correctAnd you can remove the description Apr to May.
>>correctBecause always receipt of telecomunication is cost of last month.
>>Because the usual receipt of telecommunication is always at the end of the month.For example, If you got a receipt on July, it must be the cost for June.
>>correctIt is the reason to different the date of description and upper of voucher.>>It is the reason why we have to differentiate the date of description and upper voucher.
If you have any questions please let me know.
>>correctThank you.
>>correct
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