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2012-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I have some questions about expense reimbursement of Mr. [Name]. Can I ask what about the expense reimbursement? Is it for like a salary or personal cost? If the expense reimbursement is a salary or personal cost, HR team of BKO said that we don't need to pay any salary and personal cost to BBR. Would you please give me a details or could you please explain to me or Mr. [Name] by e-mail? We have to know the correct information for us to know more about it . If you are not proper contact person, would you please tell me who knows? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you for your help.

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Hi There Happy Tuesday! Thank you for learning English this is very important to us so that we can communicate well. If you can communicate well, then you can talk to other people especially Americans and you can understand them. So keep on practicing English especially your vocabulary, grammar, and pronounciation. Take care always and God bless you.    Dear [Name]. [Name], >>CORRECTGood morning! >>CORRECTI have some questions about expense reimbursement of Mr. [Name]. >>CORRECTCan I ask what about the expense reimbursement? >> Can I ask what is expense reimbursement?Is it for like a salary or personal cost? >>CORRECTIf the expense reimbursement is a salary or personal cost, HR team of BKO said that we don\'t need to pay any salary and personal cost to BBR. >>If the expense reimbursement is like a salary or personal cost, HR team of BKO said that we don\'t need to pay any salary and personal cost to BBR.Would you please give me a details or could you please explain to me or Mr. [Name] by e-mail? >>Would you please give me some details or could you please explain to me or Mr. [Name] by email?We have to know the correct information for us to know more about it . >>CORRECTIf you are not proper contact person, would you please tell me who knows? >>If you are not the proper person to contact with, please let me know who I may talk to about it.I\'m looking forward for your reply. >>CORRECTThank you for your help. >>CORRECT

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