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I don't know who is related person about ELO scan system.
I'd like to say that to use more useful ELO scan system.
I'm the person who using the ELO scan system for 7month from Nov.2011 to now.
I can easily see the attached invoices and details by computer monitor after scanning.
But I'd like to suggest the printing function of high quality.
Now we can't read the word in the invoices when we print the attached invoices and details.
Because the invoices has not good printing quality.
We have to send the copy of all invoices to HSBC bank when we pay the invoices to overseas.
Someone of tresury part is coping the all of invoices that we have to pay the invoices to overseas.
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Hi there! Thanks for sharing this with me. I made some corrections so continue practicing writing in English.Happy lunch^^ See you later!
-T.Camille
I don\'t know who is related person about ELO scan system.
>>I don\'t know someone related to the ELO scan system.I\'d like to say that to use more useful ELO scan system.
>>I\'d like to say to make ELO scan system more useful.I\'m the person who using the ELO scan system for 7month from Nov.2011 to now.
>>I\'m someone who uses ELO scan system for 7 months already starting Nov.2011 \'till now.I can easily see the attached invoices and details by computer monitor after scanning.
>>correctBut I\'d like to suggest the printing function of high quality.
>>But I\'d like to suggest to increase the quality of printing function.Now we can\'t read the word in the invoices when we print the attached invoices and details.
>>correctBecause the invoices has not good printing quality.
>>The reason is that the invoices do not have good printing quality.We have to send the copy of all invoices to HSBC bank when we pay the invoices to overseas.
>> We have to send the copy of all invoices to HSBC bank when we pay the invoices overseas.Someone of tresury part is coping the all of invoices that we have to pay the invoices to overseas.
>>Someone from the treasury department is copying all the invoices that we need to pay overseas.
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