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2012-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I have a questions about unplaned budget. Mr. [Name] asked me how to request the budget of "CMF condensor type specific tooling" as seen below. The requested budget's amount is around 500millionKRW (500,000,000KRW) I don't know why delete the budget as below. But they want to create the budget of "CMF condensor type specific tooling". As I know the investment approval from is used when they request the budget one by one . Am I right? How to request the budget of 500millionKRW by unplaned? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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Hell my dear Bella! Good afternoon! Wow! You just talked about a very high unplanned budget. I was surpised. Anyway, here are my corrections my dear so please check them out. Enjoy the rest of your time at work. -xoxoTeacher Camille  Dear [Name]. [Name], >>Correct I have a questions about unplaned budget. >> I have questions about the unplanned budget. Mr. [Name] asked me how to request the budget of \"CMF condensor type specific tooling\" as seen below. >>Correct >> Mr. [Name] asked me how to request the budget of \"CMF condensor type specific tooling\" as shown below. The requested budget\'s amount is around 500millionKRW (500,000,000KRW) >> The requested budget amount is around 500 million KRW (500,000,000KRW). I don\'t know why delete the budget as below. >> I don\'t know why they deleted the budget as shown below. But they want to create the budget of \"CMF condensor type specific tooling\". >>Correct  As I know the investment approval from is used when they request the budget one by one .  Am I right? >>As far as I know, the investment approval form is used when they request the budget one by one. Am I right? How to request the budget of 500millionKRW by unplaned? >> How to request the unplanned budget of 500 million KRW? I\'m looking forward for your reply. >>Correct  Thank you. >>Correct

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