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Dear [Name]. [Name],
I have a questions about unplaned budget.
Mr. [Name] asked me how to request the budget of "CMF condensor type specific tooling" as seen below.
The requested budget's amount is around 500millionKRW (500,000,000KRW)
I don't know why delete the budget as below.
But they want to create the budget of "CMF condensor type specific tooling".
As I know the investment approval from is used when they request the budget one by one .
Am I right?
How to request the budget of 500millionKRW by unplaned?
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hell my dear Bella! Good afternoon! Wow! You just talked about a very high unplanned budget. I was surpised. Anyway, here are my corrections my dear so please check them out. Enjoy the rest of your time at work.
-xoxoTeacher Camille
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>Correct
I have a questions about unplaned budget.
>> I have questions about the unplanned budget.
Mr. [Name] asked me how to request the budget of \"CMF condensor type specific tooling\" as seen below.
>>Correct
>> Mr. [Name] asked me how to request the budget of \"CMF condensor type specific tooling\" as shown below.
The requested budget\'s amount is around 500millionKRW (500,000,000KRW)
>> The requested budget amount is around 500 million KRW (500,000,000KRW).
I don\'t know why delete the budget as below.
>> I don\'t know why they deleted the budget as shown below.
But they want to create the budget of \"CMF condensor type specific tooling\".
>>Correct
As I know the investment approval from is used when they request the budget one by one .
Am I right?
>>As far as I know, the investment approval form is used when they request the budget one by one. Am I right?
How to request the budget of 500millionKRW by unplaned?
>> How to request the unplanned budget of 500 million KRW?
I\'m looking forward for your reply.
>>Correct
Thank you.
>>Correct
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