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Hello :-) Good afternoon! Can I ask the person who reserve the hotel in Shanghai for the training? I will entreat my hotel room in Shanghai for the training. Please give me an information if you have an information the person who reseve the hotel in Shanghai for the training. Thank you for your help.

hello my dear bella,happy Monday! Here are the modifications I made for you.. Talk to you later my dear and have a good day.. Take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hello :-)Good afternoon!>>correctCan I ask the person who reserve the hotel in Shanghai for the training?>>Can I ask the person who makes the reservation in the hotel in SHanghai for the training?I will entreat my hotel room in Shanghai for the training.>>correctPlease give me an information if you have an information the person who reseve the hotel in Shanghai for the training.>>Whever is the reservation officer, plaese giveme an information regarding the rooms in the hotel for the training.Thank you for your help >>correct