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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
I have a question about cost center of investment.
Mr. [Name] and the project managers said that IPS budget already created it.
Mr. [Name] requested the unplanned budget as attached file and he said that he want to order to Seiler assp.
I confuse the cost center of 401168 (Condensor Backend) and 701068( Type Specific Tooling AC at suppliers).
Mr. [Name] said that it is not related at suppliers so it is not 701068( Type Specific Tooling AC at suppliers).
Would you please check the cost center ?
I will request the budget to Ms.Mandy after your confirmation.
Thank you for your help.
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Dear [Name]. [Name],>> Correct Good afternoon!>> Correct
I have a question about cost center of investment.>> I have a question about the cost center of invesment.
Mr. [Name] and the project managers said that IPS budget already created it.>> Mr. [Name] and the Project Managers said that the IPS budget already created it.
Mr. [Name] requested the unplanned budget as attached file and he said that he want to order to Seiler assp.>> Mr. [Name] requested for the unplanned budget as seen in the attached file and he said that he wants to order to Seiler assp.
I confuse the cost center of 401168 (Condensor Backend) and 701068( Type Specific Tooling AC at suppliers).>> I am confused with the cost center of 401168 (Condensor Backend) and 701068 (Type Specific Tooling AC at suppliers)
Mr. [Name] said that it is not related at suppliers so it is not 701068( Type Specific Tooling AC at suppliers).>> Mr. [Name] said that it is not related with the suppliers, so it is not 701068 (Type Specific Tooling AC at suppliers).
Would you please check the cost center ?>> Correct
I will request the budget to Ms. [Name] after your confirmation.>> Correct
Thank you for your help.
>> Correct
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